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I awake in the night;
I can no longer sleep.
I don't see myself in mirrors;
I see somebody else.
I am alone.
I am dead.
The red stripes on white flesh
Keep me somewhat Sane.
I stare at the ceiling;
It is as cold and dead as I am.
The pain burns within;
as my life slowly fades away.
A poem using the metaphors of vampires.
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kazia202 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
An amazing job well done! :) This is an incredible display of human imagination and reality shoved into one! keep up the good work
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icegirl93 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010
=o awesome! nice job. very melancholy and thought-provoking.
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Carralak Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2009
great job on that one :-)
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dearestprincess2 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2008
Beautiful job^^! You grasp Vampires vey well^^.
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NeuroticMouse Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2008
Nice....nice methapors. That with miror...I felt like you when I read the poem. Its very nice...
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cadrack Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2008   Writer
You have a really good grasp on vampires. :D

Not many people understand that vampires are very lonely beings, but I could fell it in your poem!
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This is beautiful....

Yay for Vampyres!
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Psycho-Lawton Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2008
That's deep, faving.
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VonIrvin Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
funny that you dont realize hes only king because hes the on who cant deviate for the code.
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VonIrvin Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
im not talking of human kings who are born with the "right" but of the kings born through blood.
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